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1:54 PM, Wednesday February 15th 2023

Hi! Sorry for replying so late (I haven't looked at my Drawabox account for a while).

Anyway, these look great. These definitely feel clearer and more solid, though the two on the top left (with one sausage lying on top of another) looks a bit strange. I think you might not have followed the contour of the form underneath, so it looks a bit flat. But besides that, it's looking good.

I'll mark this as complete now.

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2:22 PM, Wednesday February 15th 2023

I understand, I'll keep practicing these for a while.

Thanks for replying!

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