Hello! Since umbr didn't answer I'll take over the crit, in the future if something like this happens you can just ping me on the discord and I'll take over it, so you don't have to wait that much time. About your last revision I think you made good progress with the forms.

The main thingy I still see is that some of them are off balance and look like they would fall off, always try to imagine them in their last position, think of them like water baloons, and imagine if they fell over the other sausages until they get stable. Here's a few corrections . Some of the contour curves felt a bit flat as well, so always try to remember the complete ellipse in perspective when drawing them if you aren't already, it helps.

About the animal drawings I more or less agree with what umbr said, overall you've done a good approach and they look solid in general. On some drawings you're doing well with the sausage method, like on the wolves, but on others like on the bears you make some mistakes, like not drawing through all the sausages, or not drawing intersections between forms. Whenever you approach legs, and other similar forms on drawabox you need to use simple organic forms, like on the organic intersections exercise, and they need to adhere to the forms explained in lesson 2. Here's the explanation.

Here are some of the issues explained on your work , given that please do one more deer to check if you got them right and then you're set for lesson 6, good luck and great job! Keep it up!