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3:32 PM, Friday October 15th 2021

Good job, I think you have understood well how to divide the planes and thus draw the shapes and details correctly in place.

Except for the scotch tape that I think the hole goes further back, maybe you can correct it later.

The dimensions of the boxes where the objects are inserted seem to me well proportioned, so the objects seem to have an appropriate shape. I have that speaker too, and I think you got it right!

The final lines that are supposed to be the gradient may not work as well for objects 7 and 8 as they do for the speaker or the charger. i think it doesn't work on 7 and 8 because it doesn't look subtle as in the first three objects. They look like a print to me.

I hope i got to serve in something, good work Slyx!!

Feel free to give me feedback or comment on any of my exercises.

See you!

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5:00 PM, Friday October 15th 2021

I definitely see where your coming from, I think I really could've done better with that scotch tape and the stapler.

I also definitely pushed those lines too far on objects 7 and 8 and it makes it look very stylized.

Thank you for going over my submission Anbarbosa, in return I'll review one of your submissions^^

-Slyx

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