## Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

##### 10:01 PM, Saturday May 21st 2022

I'm going to start by saying: "Hello and Thank You" for taking the time to look over my work and for providing this resource, I truly appreciate it.

As for my work:

1- I feel like my ellipses tend to 'spiral', do you have any tips on how I can correct this or is that just practice?

2- For the Organic Perspective exercise, I thought that I had to draw through the boxes (I could have sworn that Uncomfortable said we will be doing that throughout the course), but as I re-read the material and looked at other submissions, I noticed that it wasn't the case and corrected for the last two frames.

Thanks once again, and look forward to hearing your feedback.

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##### 9:36 PM, Monday May 23rd 2022

Hello and congrats on completing lesson one. My name is Rob and I'm a teaching assistant for Drawabox who will be handling your lesson one critique. Starting with your superimposed lines these are off to a fine start. You are keeping a clearly defined starting point with all of your wavering at the opposite end. Your ghosted lines and planes turned out well. You are using the ghosting method to good effect to get confident linework with a pretty decent deal of accuracy that will get better and better with practice.

Your rotated box exercise turned out pretty well. I like that you drew this nice and big as that really helps when dealing with complex spatial problems. You also did a good job drawing through your boxes and keeping your gaps narrow and consistent. While the rotations here aren't perfect this was a very good effort overall. This is a great exercise to come back to after a few lessons to see how much your spatial thinking ability has improved. Your organic perspective exercises are looking pretty good. You seem to be getting comfortable using the ghosting method and drawing from your shoulder for confident linework which is great. Your box constructions are pretty solid for the most part but you seem to be relying on parallel lines for a lot of these constructions which is even leading to weird divergences in some places. The 250 box challenge will be a great next step for you in understanding in how box lines need to converge to vp's.

Overall this was a really solid submission that showed a nice deal of growth. Your line confidence and ellipses are both coming along nicely. I think you are understanding most of the concepts these lessons are trying to convey quite well. I'm going to mark this as complete and good luck with the 250 box challenge. Keep up the good work!

Next Steps:

The 250 Box Challenge

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
##### 9:27 AM, Tuesday May 24th 2022

Thank you Rob for the positive and helpful feedback!

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