Hey ther Apichu, Welcome to DaB! I'm Reboot and today i'll be critiquing your work. I'll be dividing your critique into 3 sections - lines, ellipses and boxes.

LINES-

Superintendend lines- I notice quite a few lines with fraying on both ends, remember to pay attension to where your line starts. We cannot control the point our lines ends perfectly, no matter how much we ghost but we can control where the line starts

Ghosted lines- One problem I notice here is your lines wobble a lot. Remember- Fluency over accuracy. What is happening is that you are hesitant when yu make your mark, one thing you can do is to move your hand faster. When you slow down while making a mark then your brain subconsiously or consiously autocorrects the line, causing wobble. Noone will judge your lines based of accuracy, you dont have to worry about it at all. A smooth mark that is inaccurate is much more useful than a wobbly mark that is accurate. i suggest you re-read this page- https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/ghostedlines.

Ghosted planes- I have been seeing alot of arcing here. "While this can be related to not drawing from the shoulder (and the smaller arc of motion forcing you into an arcing line), some people will find that they have a natural tendency to arc their lines slightly when attempting to draw one that is straight.

One approach I've heard to correct this is to consciously arc your line slightly in the opposite direction. The expected result is that this conscious adjustment will compensate for the issue and will result in a straight line that does not arc in either direction. Over time and practice, your brain will associate this motion with a straight line, and eventually you won't have to be quite so conscious of it." IF you have the later problem as stated in this quote from the site, one thing I did to help out was to look ate the way my arm moved to see weather or not my arm subconsiously was arcing to one direction, then I would correct it while ghosting.

Before I move one to ellipses I'd like to mention that you must take as much time you need to make your mark. DO the best of your ability and do not rush

ELLIPSES-

Table Of Ellipses- Your ellipses frequently overlap other ellipses or don't touch all the sides. Your ellipses don't seem to confident either. Theres alot of tapering due to lack of confidence, remember to make fast strokes and keep a consisten speed throught the ellipse so that it doesn't taper. On top of that rememebr to take as much time as you need in the preperations tep, often the reason for lackluster ellipses and lines is that the student doesn't give the time he/she needs to ghost and plan it.

Ellipses on planes- Your ellipses stay in the plane a bit better here but are still quite not confident. I can still see some improvment.

Funnels- Remember that the minor axis should be perfectly in the middle of the c curves, all of them have the minro axis in the incorrect position. Also dont leave any spacing between the ellipses.

BOXES-

Rough PErspective- Your boxes themselves here are quite good. One problem I see si that you tend to redo a line once you make a mistake, Please do not do this. You should learn to accept your mistakes, as bob ross says, "happy little mistakes".

ROtated boxes- These are amazing! One thing I noticed is that you have made too much spacing between the boxes.

Organic perspective- Your lines here have got a bit better in the arcing side, but theres still a ton of wobble. Soemtimes your liens diverge, remember that the lines converge the further they are from you, but overall you have done a pretty good job.

Overall- You boxes are simply outstanding. The main problem I see is lack of confidence. You have done a good job mate.

           Remember to read through the critique throughly.