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3:09 AM, Friday July 28th 2023
Hello I'll be covering your HW.
Superimposed lines: Biggest thing you only sumbited one page, you need two.
Ghosted Lines: This is a complete mess and jumble. Direcitons need to be read properly and examples seen.
Ghosted Planes: Better, direcitons were followed.
Table of Elipses: Clustered but attempt to keep everything tight is there.
Elipses in a Plane: Little wobbly and shaky. Warming up with ghosting would help.
Funnels: Much better with elipses. Improvement.
Plotted Perspective: Sadly most of the box lines don't even reach intended point.
Rough Perspective: Not bad here but a revsion would help.
Rotated Boxes: Much better, direcitons were read, clear understanding.
Organic Perspective: Not bad I think you got it.
Next Steps:
The thing I noticed was not seeming to read the directions. So revisions are needed. I would like one of the following:
Superinmposed lines
Ghosted Lines
Plotted perspective
Rough Perspective
6:50 PM, Friday July 28th 2023
7:44 PM, Friday July 28th 2023
Much better. Now you are ready to move on.
Next Steps:
Remember read the directions, and above all that while a challenge it can be done.
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