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11:47 AM, Thursday April 20th 2023
edited at 11:48 AM, Apr 20th 2023

Hello JustCuteGirlzArt, thanks for explaining the rationale behind that arrangement of cast shadows in your organic intersections.

Having a reason for drawing the shadows in this manner is a good start, as it shows you were thinking about what you were doing, and means I'm able to give more specific advice on how to correct them.

To make it easier to understand which forms we're talking about, I've numbered them here.

So, if we consider the areas of shadow on forms 3, 4, and 5 that I'd previously highlighted in red. You've stated that they "are from the sausage form on the top." There are 3 forms that are above these shadows on the 2D space of the paper. 7 is too small and too far over to the left, so I'll discount that immediately. Forms 3 and 4 are casting shadows onto form 2, so by that logic 2 must be underneath forms 3 and 4 in 3D space. That leaves form 6, but we can see a shadow being cast from form 6 onto forms 3, 4 and 5 directly beneath form 6, as highlighted here. So I stand by my earlier statement that the areas highlighted in red here are illogical. I hope that better explains why these shadows cannot be present.

Your explanation for the gaps in the shadows I'd highlighted in blue seems to hinge on the shadows being lighter because the form is further from the ground plane. As you stated, we only have two values to work with, so, you need to fill the whole cast shadow with black. If you leave areas of your shadow white then it's not shadow anymore. We're ignoring things like reflected light and ambient light for this exercise.

You are correct in thinking that the distance between the form and the ground plane will affect the cast shadow. It just doesn't happen in this manner. I've put together some diagrams to help explain this visually for you. I'd also recommend grabbing a lamp or a torch and and examining the behaviour of cast shadows from household objects to gain a better understanding of this. The distance between the form casting the shadow and the form it is being cast upon (in this case, the ground) is going to affect the distance that the shadow gets projected, but the shape of the shadow will still be a projection of the shape of the form's silhouette.

So, if we treat the shadow you'd drawn being cast from form 5 onto form 1 as correct, then here is how the rest of the shadow being cast from form 5 might look. I've used a dashed line to indicate where the hidden parts of the shadow fall. I don't draw this when actually doing the exercise, but I thought it would be helpful to show the thought process here. By considering the shadow cast by the entire form we can see that even though form 5 is not resting on the ground we won't see a gap between the form and the shadow it casts on the ground. I hope that clears it up for you.

edited at 11:48 AM, Apr 20th 2023
6:26 PM, Thursday June 1st 2023

I attempted the organic intersections again

https://imgur.com/QVsIdOP

12:56 PM, Friday June 2nd 2023
edited at 1:00 PM, Jun 2nd 2023

Hello JustCuteGirlzArt, thank you for getting back to me with your organic intersections.

This is a substantial improvement on your previous attempts.

Your linework appears quite smooth, confident and purposeful, and I can see that you've resisted the temptation to redraw things to make corrections, nicely done.

The middle two forms are wrapping around the forms below very well, and have a convincing sense of weight to them.

The top form is the weakest of the bunch, with the far end poking up in the air it looks like there is no weight to the far end, and like it might topple off the pile. Here is how we might draw that top form in a way that feels stable and supported.

I have a couple of notes regarding your contour curves, and I've marked them on your work here.

In blue, I've redrawn a contour curve that was quite skewed. This flattens your forms. If you're having difficulty aligning your curves you can draw a central flow line for your forms, and then try to draw your contour curves so that they're cut into two symmetrical halves by this flow line.

In red, your contour curves were contradicting the orientation of your form. The cast shadow you had drawn tells us that the right side of the form is facing towards the viewer, but your contour curves tell us that it faces away. I've flipped their direction to correct for this. In green I noted that if the right end of the form faces towards us, then the left end will be going away, and wrapping behind the form below, so you'd want a bit of additional line weight on the lower form to clarify this overlap.

Your shadows are miles better! I can understand the logic behind each one, and you're definitely on the right track with them now. The shadow being cast by the lowest form isn't quite selling the illusion that the whole form is resting on a flat ground plane. If I use the little x you've drawn as an indication of the light source I think the shadow will probably look more like this.

All right. I'll check this exercise off as completed. Please continue to apply the advice I've provided here when you practise this exercise in your warmups.

When you complete your animal constructions please submit all 4 pages together. We do not have the resources for TAs to critique work piecemeal, and so you do need to submit everything together, as assigned. While that puts more work on you (in terms of giving you more room to end up making the same mistakes more than might feel necessary), it is necessary to put that on the student (as explained here in Lesson 0) due to the extremely low price at which our feedback is offered.

Next Steps:

Please complete 4 pages of animal constructions.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
edited at 1:00 PM, Jun 2nd 2023
8:26 PM, Monday July 17th 2023
edited at 8:27 PM, Jul 17th 2023

Here is the link to 4 additional animal constructions I did. I think this shows some improvement when adding additional forms. Let me know if you need anything else.

https://imgur.com/a/CKNzBHd

edited at 8:27 PM, Jul 17th 2023
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