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1:21 AM, Tuesday March 28th 2023

intersection

i like how these forms drawn with confidance

i think cone need minor axis

good they have same size but main issue again u are not aware of the intersection u need to train your eye see pinned post in this lesson channel in dsicord and train your eye and deconstruct not copy the intersection understand how crossection of form intersect and not just make random hatch of sides not based on intersection all of them are rushed which not give any sense

Go through the whole lesson again, read and watch all the material, and do all the homework again.

Take your time.

Next Steps:

repeat again 1 page of boxes and 1 page form intersection

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
3:53 AM, Thursday March 30th 2023

https://eyes.training/intersections/

this will help to train not copy

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