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9:45 AM, Friday February 24th 2023

Organic Arrows

Starting by the organic arrows they are drawn with a good deal of confidence, which helps to capture the fluidity with which they move through space

your making some good attempts at the perspective of the ribbon but push more. The main issue here though is that you are not aware that the negative space between the zigzagging sections of the ribbon should decrease as it moves further away, as shown here ( https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/011d064f.jpg ), this is the only thing missing for your arrows to look tridimensional. this is the only thing missing for your arrows to look tridimensional.

intersection

good they have same size but main issue u are not aware of the intersection u need to train your eye for this i recommend se pinned post in this lesson channel and train your eye and deconstruct not copy the intersection

orgainc intersection

good job like the confidant ellipse contour and need some training the forms drawn well but try not to push shadow that like hugging as lesson described

Mistake: Shadows sticking to forms

but good job sorry for late replay

Next Steps:

intersection box 1 page\

intersection other forms 1 page

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11:52 AM, Friday March 17th 2023

More colisions i hope these are better https://imgur.com/a/tUlRPhN

1:21 AM, Tuesday March 28th 2023

intersection

i like how these forms drawn with confidance

i think cone need minor axis

good they have same size but main issue again u are not aware of the intersection u need to train your eye see pinned post in this lesson channel in dsicord and train your eye and deconstruct not copy the intersection understand how crossection of form intersect and not just make random hatch of sides not based on intersection all of them are rushed which not give any sense

Go through the whole lesson again, read and watch all the material, and do all the homework again.

Take your time.

Next Steps:

repeat again 1 page of boxes and 1 page form intersection

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3:53 AM, Thursday March 30th 2023

https://eyes.training/intersections/

this will help to train not copy

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