Hi Pgcools i will be reviewing your homework!
Lines: it looks great. but there's some issues, your ghosted lines seems pretty nice however some of them are wobbly or arched. i will recommend you to make sure you're drawing from the shoulder and to try to arch consciously in the opposite direction to prevent arching lines. i also notice that some of your lines in the ghosted lines exercise are not touching both ends, your lines should touch the starting dot, take the time to place your pen carefully at the begining of each lines.
Ellipses: good job with your ellipses they look confident, are drawn through, they're not overlapping so much on the ellipses table exercise and your funnels are pretty great you got that!
Boxes: i have not much to say about your boxes they're pretty great i would just advise you not to be afraid of making things cluttered in your practice, i think you could have fit more boxes and make them overlap more in the organic perspective exercise.
Next Steps:
move on to the 250 boxes challenge! and don't forget to apply the 50% rule!
This is a remarkable little pen. I'm especially fond of this one for sketching and playing around with, and it's what I used for the notorious "Mr. Monkey Business" video from Lesson 0. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
I would not recommend this for Drawabox - we use brush pens for filling in shadow shapes, and you do not need a pen this fancy for that. If you do purchase it, save it for drawing outside of the course.
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