first, you should add two more pages of ghosted planes. they are required to be separate from ellipses in planes exercise.
second, you left alot of space on your pages of superimposed lines and the boxes exercises. you should use space better.
finally, rotated boxes are completely out of sync. you should revisit the video of the exercise.
Next Steps:
Do two ghosted planes pages.
Revisit rotated boxes.
Just replying to say that you can use the already made ghosted planes for the ellipses in planes, as said in the lesson material.
remember those planes you drew as part of the lines section of this lesson? Find those pages (hopefully you didn't toss them out, burn them, or use them as nest materials for your pet bird), because we're gonna need 'em.
There are plenty of things missing in your critique, especially on line confidence which is far more important, I'll do another critique to provide additional feedback.
Also, Omar I see you are trying to critique a few lesson 1 subs. Thank you for taking the time to critique. However, I believe you should wait until you are done with lesson 1 and have had your submission approved. If I could offer some advice in the case you still want to critique, since it will help both the person you are critiquing and also yourself since you'll be more aware of the workings of the lesson, I'd suggest that you have a look at this guide for L1 critique written by Elodin: https://pastebin.com/dYnFt9PQ
A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.
In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.
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