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6:16 AM, Friday March 11th 2022
hi Fredericthins my name is trollfromhell and i will give u my critique of your lesson 1
1.Lines
your super imposed lines are good but i think it's time for u to ghost your lines before u stroke ur straight lines to the far end,and ur ghosting lines are good i like it
2.elipses in the planes
when u draw elipses make sure u keep the lines of the elipses close together since we are told to draw it through to make them look clean
3.elipses in tables
u should also do ghosting method when drawing elipses and do rotate ur paper if you find some angles are very hard to draw elipses
4.elipses in funnels
On funnels, the minor axis (the line in the middle) should cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.
5.plotted perspective
you nailed it on the head,they look great and awesome i like it so much
6.rough perspective
even if you find it difficult to plot the lines with rough estimation you have made sure the width lines parallel to horizon and height lines perpendicular to horizon. so it doesnt matter for now if your boxes are not really accurate when we use extending lines to vanishing point
7.rotated boxes
there are some boxes which are not rotating,the key is to know vp slides along the horizonal line as the boxes rotate,i am sure u will find this guide useful https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/368870697742630912/715669112222908466/zfr3o7xneog31.png
8.organic perspective
they are great and i think it's time for u to learn boxes deeper in 250 boxes exercise Next Steps:
1 ellipses in funnels
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