Hi CONSCIOUSLEMON9,
Thanks again for taking the time to offer me this feedback. It's been extremely useful and highly appreciated.
I've attached a link to the revision requested:
Looking forward to your response.
Thank you and have a great weekend.
Regards,
Silviu
It looks better. Just a note that it would probably look better if you were to apply a gradient to your hatching from dense to sparse. Also, add some line weight to the overlapping edges so that you can better clarify what's in front of what.
Other than that, good job for completing lesson 2.
Next Steps:
Move on to Lesson 3.
Yes, I have to admit that I rushed the last page and focused only on the foreshortening. That's why the hatching and the lineweight are a bit messy. I should have taken my time.
Thank you again for all the feedback. It's been an immense help.
Have a great day!
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).
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