Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

11:08 AM, Sunday May 17th 2020

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Hey guys,Please critique my assignments. :D

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4:10 AM, Monday May 18th 2020

This is a pretty good submission overall, but the main thing of note is that the majority of the time you've been too focused on accurate linework where you've been wobbling (see https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/8/wobbling), instead of our actual priority in this course which is smooth, confident linework (accuracy comes as the muscle memory builds up over months of practice). So, in order to make sure you understand this prioritization, I'd like you to please re-submit half a page of the table of ellipses exercise, where you've clearly focused on smooth, even shaped ellipses rather than having them perfectly accurate

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Please re-submit half a page of tables of ellipses

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1:22 PM, Monday May 18th 2020
5:45 AM, Tuesday May 19th 2020

This is better, but keep in mind in your future warmups you should be aiming to keep your ellipses within the bounds but still prioritizing smooth, even shaped ellipses without wobbling or bumps in the line.

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