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7:09 PM, Tuesday July 12th 2022

For some of the superimposed lines there is fraying on both sides. Try to keep the starting point same.

The ghosted lines, planes and ellipses are done well with confidence! Good job!!

In rough perspective, some of the lines are wobbly. Also some of the horizontal lines have an arc, so make sure to draw from the shoulder.

The rotated boxes and organic perspective are also fine.

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You can move on to the 250 boxes challenge

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3:33 AM, Sunday July 17th 2022

well done everything is done well.

Some things to be mind full of is while doing the superimposed lines some of them have fraying cause your second page from top has that.

I see small amounts of wobbling on the boxes but other than that all is fine.

I agree with APPREHENSIVE_MAN for you to move on.

So I will give this a go to the 250 box challenge.

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