8:50 PM, Sunday August 1st 2021
Hi, thank you so much for reviewing my work!
Here are the additional pages I did:
To sum up my own thoughts:
Leaves
1) I definitely agree that I need to work on those and thought so when submitting my homework for the first time already. After going over it for a second time I think the fluidity improved, though I still think there's more to improve on.
2) I still struggle with the edge detail. I didn't add it onto all the leaves because - I'll be honest - I didn't want to mess it up. I'll definitely spend more time on studying those though.
3) I misunderstood what you meant by 'complex leaf structure' and only realized now, so I'll be adding those in my next training sessions :')
4) I'm scared of leave texture. I've tried it a bit but it seems so heavily detailed, if you have any tips or pointers I'd be glad to hear them.
Construction
1) I tried to keep in mind everything you mentioned and I feel like I improved a bit, but there's still stuff I struggle a lot with.
2) Page 10 Plant 2 had many folds and the like and I'm not satisfied with the result at all. What can I do to improve on this particular flower?
3) Ellipses confuse me and so do cast shadows. I understand the principle of cast shadows but when I try to draw them I always get confused and think too much about whether this particular shadow is a form or cast shadow and how to draw them best.
Again, thank you very much for your detailed answer and I hope there's been improvement in my work!