Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
5:41 AM, Wednesday July 27th 2022
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1:46 PM, Thursday July 28th 2022
Hi, good job completing the lesson 1.
I can see your lines are improving nicely with every attempts and you have done well with superimposed lines.
However, I noticed some of lines with wobbles in the middle. While it is alright to start with wobbles and fraying near the end of the line, you must pay attention to those, as when you eventually draw with wobbling lines it will get frustrating.
You might need to work on superimposed lines with confidence for a while until you can draw lines with almost no wobbles and fraying in the middle. I believe you will eventually produce consistent straight lines with confidence and it will help you a lot the future (doesn't mean it will be free of wobbles and fraying, but close enough).
Moving into ellipses, I can see you're doing really well although some of them can get really uneven and loose. You might need to take some time to develop your muscle memory on doing those ellipses, which you can do by doing warm-ups before doing subsequent Drawabox lessons. I'd also recommend having more patience with planning your shapes with ghosting, every single of them. Otherwise, your ellipses are well done.
We'll continue with rough perspective assignment. At this part, you need to make sure to draw boxes with confidence. That's what the line exercise for. I can see you're struggling with boxes furthest from the VP, as your lines often overshoot the VP. You might need to work more on such situation. Otherwise, you've done well in this part.
Next into rotating boxes, I can see you have some difficulties with boxes further rotating into each corners, since they don't look they're rotating properly in perspective. However, it's still a great start from what I saw, as most people will have harder time with this exercise. Once again, it's well done.
The last one, organic perspective. Here, I'll recommend you to work on your rough perspective by taking your time doing 250 boxes challenge in the next one. Although some tight boxes has decent perspective, you can see bigger boxes going wild without really converging into a single VP. Anyway, take your time with perspective exercise. Knowing a good perspective is helpful, but doing it intuitively is much better.
Overall, you're doing really good with your first exercise.
Next Steps:
You might need to work more on your line confidence. Make sure to do line and ellipse exercise for warmups, or whenever you have a piece of paper and a pen with you. Keep in mind of this and you will be ready to move on to the 250 Boxes Challenge.
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