1:49 PM, Tuesday March 19th 2024
Hello there I call myself Quat and I am going to review your exercises for lesson 3 today
First of all for The organic arrows and the leaves exercises: your lines look pretty clean and they imply a good understanding of how these objects exist in 3d space so great job.
As for the branches exercise You tend to have Very Visible tails Which is expected from this exercise but you made it very noticeable , especially in your plant constructions, which is why I am going to ask you to draw another page of it.
now for the plant constructions: and before I start I have to point out that More than half of the plants you drew were Demo plants and it is stated Here That more than half your plants are supposed to be non demo plants, I am not going to make you redo it but keep that in mind for future lessons.
Also Please write the number of the pages in your future submissions, it is going to be a pain to specify some of the plants.
Now assuming that you used the refrance provided in the demos your King oyster's head is a bit too small and that may stem from you rushing the drawing. Other than that you did a good job with the drawing.
As for the Other textured mushroom I think that the construction is really good but the texturing on the holes of the mushroom looks flat. Since it isn't a major part of the lesson 3 I won't ask you to redo it, but I recommend trying the 25 texture challenge if you want to work on your texture skills.
The other untextured mushroom Looks flat in terms of the stem and I will make you redo it.
The fly trap plant looks squished to the left for some reason, but it is constructed really well for the most part so good job on that.
The rest of the plants look well done and the only mistakes that I can see are stuff from the branches exercise.
Next Steps:
Your next step is doing one page of the Branches exercise And redraw the untextured mushroom