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3:10 PM, Sunday April 21st 2024

Hi Benj

Sincere apologies for not uploading the missing pages!

Please see the updated album with the missing exercises:

Thanks very much for your helpful critique.

Patrick

10:00 AM, Monday April 22nd 2024

No stress! The missing paged whose siblings I'd seen look good (though please try not to doodle in the pages (or whatever is happening in your superimposed lines page, I'm not sure :P)). As for the rotated boxes exercise, it's looking solid. You might think that you've messed up, what with the box not being fully round, but we're happy to see the student try different things with each quadrant - it shows that they're willing to be bold, and experiment, rather than stick to the safety of what they know. It is a bit of a shame that those quadrants are such that you're missing some boxes, but given how much space the ones there have taken, that's understandable. The rest of your boxes are snug, and rotate comfortably, so it seems you've absorbed what you need to from this exercise, anyway.

Next Steps:

Onto the box challenge, then! And good luck!

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