THank you for this amazing course. I hope my work is up to mark, it has improved a lot since I started with rough lines. I've created this on my ipad in the procreate app, hope that's alright! Would love to hear your thoughts on these so I can improve or move on to the 250 baks challenge!
Hello, I will be offering my critique of your homework.
Before I start, there's no problem sending lessons done digitally if you're not going for official feedback (although drawing on paper is recommended), just make sure you turn off stabilization.
Superimposed lines
It seems good. The lines are very smooth, continuous and without fraying on both sides.
You forgot to submit a page for this exercise.
Ghosted lines
You didn't send the page for this exercise either.
Ghosted planes
His lines are still good, with continuous tagetory and great precision.
Table of ellipses
Your ellipses seem to be slightly shaky, but it's not a big problem as their smoothness improves over the next few exercises.
They are drawn twice (nice).
It looks like you are actually ghosting, and trying to make the ellipses touch properly.
Ellipses in planes
In general, they are smoother than before and I see that you made an effort to make the ellipses meet the 4 sides of the planes.
Funnels
Your ellipses here are not so bad and you even align them with the central axis well.
Plotted perspective
Not bad. However, you forgot to add a vertical line to finish a box (I marked it here).
Rough perspective
When extending the lines, you extended them towards the vanishing point, but the correct thing to do is to extend them towards the horizon line (following the direction that the mark is traveling, and not correcting it).
As you did not send the other page of this exercise, do this exercise paying attention to what I pointed out.
Rotated boxes
It's great.
Some boxes follow the same vanishing point (here).
Organic perspective
It seems good. You will improve your boxes over time.
Next Steps:
1 page of superimposed lines
1 page of ghosted lines
1 page of rough perspective
Hi Adley, hope you're awesome!
Thank you for the detailed feedback, I really appreciate it; I had my stabilization turned off because the goal here to improve, not just go through the exercises but to improve my hand-eye coordination and shoulder/arm movement.
I went ahead and did the missed exercises on paper, the difference was significant but I found it to be much more easier to adapt to compared to a smooth screen.
You can view the pages here: https://imgur.com/a/bMDcRUK
Thank you again for the detailed feedback, I look forward to hearing from you. :)
This looks great. The lines are smooth, there is no fraying on both sides in the overlapping lines exercise, you applied the ghosting method and made the line extensions correctly. Good job.
Don't forget to apply the 50% rule and add these exercises to your warm-up pool.
Next Steps:
250 boxes challenge
ignore this message, I made a mistake
Next Steps:
250 boxes challenge
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