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Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

10:49 AM, Monday March 18th 2024

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Ghosted Plans & Ellipses in Planes share partly the same exercise sheet.

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11:13 PM, Monday March 25th 2024

Eldast, don't worry, I'm here to give you my feedback on your lesson 1.

Lines: I believe you made good lines. Although some have deviations, they are smooth.

Ellipses: I noticed that you often exceeded the limit of drawing them 3 times, plus some of them were deformed. You can try to pay more attention when ghosting to try to smooth them out and not exceed the limits I mentioned.

Cashiers: YOU DID VERY WELL. IT IS SERIOUS. The rotated boxes exercise is very good. It would have been nice if you had used line weight in the organic perspective. I didn't need to correct the boxes in rough perspective.

In general, you did well, you just need to pay attention to what I said about ellipses. I recommend that you do some of these exercises as a warm-up for future drawings.

Next Steps:

Your next step is the 250 Boxes Challenge. Good luck:)

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6:19 AM, Tuesday March 26th 2024
edited at 7:34 AM, Mar 26th 2024

Hi Adley, appreciate your feedback.

Ellipses we're tough for me. Doing them within 2 rounds often ended in them being not circular enough, whereas 3+ helped me shaping them. Yet, will keep doing them as warm-ups.

Thanks for the input about line weight, will incorporate that too :)

Cheers

edited at 7:34 AM, Mar 26th 2024
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