Eldast, don't worry, I'm here to give you my feedback on your lesson 1.
Lines: I believe you made good lines. Although some have deviations, they are smooth.
Ellipses: I noticed that you often exceeded the limit of drawing them 3 times, plus some of them were deformed. You can try to pay more attention when ghosting to try to smooth them out and not exceed the limits I mentioned.
Cashiers: YOU DID VERY WELL. IT IS SERIOUS. The rotated boxes exercise is very good. It would have been nice if you had used line weight in the organic perspective. I didn't need to correct the boxes in rough perspective.
In general, you did well, you just need to pay attention to what I said about ellipses. I recommend that you do some of these exercises as a warm-up for future drawings.
Next Steps:
Your next step is the 250 Boxes Challenge. Good luck:)
Hi Adley, appreciate your feedback.
Ellipses we're tough for me. Doing them within 2 rounds often ended in them being not circular enough, whereas 3+ helped me shaping them. Yet, will keep doing them as warm-ups.
Thanks for the input about line weight, will incorporate that too :)
Cheers
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