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4:53 PM, Sunday July 4th 2021
edited at 4:54 PM, Jul 4th 2021

Just read the critique and finished the additional leaf homework and thanks for the amazing critique and the reply to my question.

Not overly satisfied with the results but heres the homework.

http://imgur.com/gallery/qsG0Zcc

edited at 4:54 PM, Jul 4th 2021
5:04 PM, Sunday July 4th 2021

This is better, so I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete. As a rule though, in the future I would refrain from jumping straight into the work so quickly. Give yourself some time for the critique to sink in, reread the relevant parts of the lesson material, then give it a shot once you've allowed your brain to soak in it. That may make your results somewhat more satisfactory for you in the future.

Next Steps:

Move onto lesson 4.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
7:23 PM, Sunday July 4th 2021

Understood, thank you

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