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1:59 PM, Thursday March 30th 2023

Hello! I'm gonna do the critique on video so I don't hurt my wrist too much, if you can't hear something well or want me to explain something else please tell me! Here's the crit.

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4:35 PM, Saturday April 1st 2023
edited at 4:36 PM, Apr 1st 2023

Oh no... I totally forgot to scan them. I remember doing them during a stressful period at work (that's where I scan all my lessons). I hope a photo from my phone is good enough, I put them in the same folder but here are the links to the individual sheets.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GUPlSfUnlMIDCu42W_hbN4QWj-XUq7uc/view?usp=share_link

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GVILmLlOYlzjqwTQJd7DNa1ZKTs0XMRN/view?usp=share_link

Your critique is awesome by the way. I'm inspired to do video critiques myself. Thank you so much for taking the time, what you pointed out about ghosting even the smaller leaf details is true. I forget to remind myself of this when I get lost in the details.

edited at 4:36 PM, Apr 1st 2023
9:30 PM, Saturday April 1st 2023

Yup, that's good like I expected, just be careful because on some ellipses you aren't drawing through them twice.

Glad I could help! That said, good luck on lesson 4! Keep up the good work!

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