11:25 AM, Tuesday August 10th 2021
Hello,
here's the critique:
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Arrows: edges look a bit sketchy, make sure you use ghosting & confident lines when adding extra lineweight
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Contour ellipses: you prioritize hitting edges instead of confident lines - getting confident ellipse in is more important (as accuracy will improve with practice)
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Contour curves: mostly OK, just ends of some of them are sketchy
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Textures: OK
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Dissections: OK
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Intersection: OK
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Organic Intersection: mostly OK, though contours once again do not look confident
I think you can move on to next lesson, though in your warm ups do keep in minds to focus on line confidence
Good luck in your art journey!
Next Steps:
Lesson 3