Thanks for it critique it helped a lot, Hopefully this looks better then my last submission. Sorry for the camera quality I have a potato phone.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/19vgyqHxX_b7911zG3fLtLBzCJrsMMDwo
I've outlined the things that need to be worked on here. You've made good progress on getting your drawings to feel more 3d. However , you're forgetting the sausage method for your drawings and are relying too much on ellipses to define your drawings. You've also forgot to add line weight to your drawings. Watch your reference carefully when adding detail , the grasshoppers side is a-bit to big , same with the pray mantis head being a-bit too big. Lastly your Organic forms with contour curves, have the same elipse roughly and are missing the dip for the sausage method.
Good work overall though on this batch of art, while there are some mistakes in it , these can be fixed overtime through practice and trial and error. Remember to also play with texture and detail from time to time in your drawings, as some areas feel a-little too blank . What i would advise for the future is to read the lessons carefully before proceeding and study your subject carefully.Take... Your... Time... as with more time , there is more opportunities to catch mistakes, add things, or fix things on our drawings to make them better compared to the first time we look at them and draw them.
Lastly , your pray mantis, grasshopper and weevil demonstrated good understanding of 3d space.
I'll be marking this lesson as complete , please remember to add these exercises to your overall pool of warm-ups. Good Luck in the future and congratulations!~
Next Steps:
Move onto Lesson 5 and make sure to incorporate lesson 4 material into your warm up pool
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