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3:52 AM, Monday January 30th 2023

So it seems to me that you don't see the purpose of using correction lines because the box that contains the cylinder will never be perfect or good enough?

The goal of drawing all of these boxed cylinders was never to draw good or perfect boxes and cylinders.

"This error checking method serves to help us work on gradually building a more intuitive sense for the proportion of these forms. Don't get stressed if you're constantly turning up mistakes - it's entirely normal, especially with so many different factors to control. The point is to gradually get better.

The truth of the matter is that for the most part, for any given drawing, you only need to be close enough. These correction methods go much farther than that, making every single error excruciatingly obvious. This in turn helps us learn from them a lot better, but don't think that you're going to be held to this standard in your actual drawings"

In the words of uncomfortable it's about building your sense of intuitive proportions.

If you ignore the extensions you may as well be drawing boxes and ignoring the cylinder. I could have reassigned the whole 100/150 boxed cylinders but I've looked at submissions that had a similar error to yours and were told to redo 50 of them.

By extending the incorrect similar line you get feedback that is crucial for improving on the next one. If you neglect the feedback there is no point in doing it.

Finally, I don't believe I repeat instructions all of it is written as if uncomfortable was the one critiquing.

If I was still unclear or if you have any more questions please let me know.

2:18 PM, Monday January 30th 2023

I see what you mean, but i was looking for more detailed advice on the boxed cylinders so i can improve them or some hidden concept that i was missing. That is worth doing them over. Just to grind them to get a better feel is not worth my time now. To me these boxed cylinders in this form take too long.

It took me 6 Months for the boxed ones only. You just asking too much of me at the moment.

9:23 PM, Monday January 30th 2023
edited at 4:44 AM, Jan 31st 2023

Okay, I understand. If you can just do 1 page with the error checking done correctly I'll mark it as complete just so I know you understand and are doing them correctly.

Also for every exercise in this course there are no hidden tips or concepts aside from the stuff uncomfortable has yet to update on the site. All you have to do is read the instructions and do the exercises to the best of your ability. Revisions only occur when the instructions aren't followed and serve to make up for the learning that would have occurred if the instructions were followed in the first place. In assigning only a page of boxed cylinders I'll trust that you'll focus more on them during your warmups.

Next Steps:

1 page of boxed cylinders

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
edited at 4:44 AM, Jan 31st 2023
10:08 PM, Friday February 24th 2023

Thank you for your understanding and your time. It took a while but i went through the instructions again. Basically it's the amount of one page put on two .

https://imgur.com/6fk7FiY

https://imgur.com/R2R7ph5

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