Hey, I'll be trying to critique your lesson 1 exercises!

Lines section

Super imposed lines

Overall this exercise is done well.There is arching and fraying on some longer lines but I see that you tried to keep fraying to a minimum and your arching well decrease as you draw more from your shoulder,good job!

Ghosted lines and Ghosted planes

These exercises are also well done,but there are some minor mistakes which are present in both.There are a few wobbly lines and also a a few redone or arching lines remember :No matter how off a line is, a student should never repeat it.Also in Ghosted planes exercise there is a lot of free space you could us,maybe start with ghosting at the edges and then move on to the middle area because u will get much more diverse planes. In the future try ghosting a little bit more not too much but 3-4 times before putting a final line so your lines feel much more confident and smooth.Overall lines section is solid.

Ellipses section

Tables of ellipses

I really like how u made all ellipses have flow and order,also some seem very confident and smooth plus most of them dont overlap nor exit the planes in which they are ,good job!Now there are also some minor mistakes which are again due to not ghosting enough,mainly some arching and fraying but overall looks very good.Also try to draw through ellipse just 2-3 times.

Funnels

Most of this funnels look solid but there are a few where the minor axis ( the line in the middle) dosent cut ellipses in two halves.Also some funnels are bent that much so ellipses cant go from small to big like they should,in the future try bending funnels a little bit more with any round object you have.

Ellipses in planes

Now there are some bigger mistakes in this one which are again due to not ghosting enough which results in wobbly ellipses, arching or going over their borders,not being smooth enough etc.Tho this isnt the case for all of them and there are some decent ones.Also since in Ghosted planes exercise there was a lot of free space same can be said for this one.When ghosting ghost around the planes so you get ellipses like these : https://imgur.com/a/z7dnKB3

Box section

Plotted perspective mostly looks fine but i think you forgot to add lines for some boxes mainly : https://imgur.com/a/USZ2ptR

Rough Perspective

Now this is a ruff one (pun intended).There are a lot of wobbly lines but thats not the biggest issue here.Most of the boxes are lost in space https://imgur.com/a/Una4Xum , https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/6bac0e3b.jpg. in stead of converging to the vanishing point https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/cc14a4f6.jpg. Your boxes are often lost in space and arent parallel and perpendicular to the horizon.Remember:

**If you ever catch yourself guessing or uncertain about how to draw a line, stop and step back. Take a look at the system you're working with, and think about the short list of possible behaviours. In one point perspective (which we are using for this exercise), you have the following behaviours:

1.**All lines that go off into the distance converge at the vanishing point

2.All horizontal lines run perfectly parallel to the horizon

3.All vertical lines run perfectly perpendicular to the horizon

Also boxes are too much near one another,try spreading them a little bit and try keep your frames which in you draw the boxes mostly the same.

Rotating boxes

In this exercise there are also a lot of mistakes,mostly boxes arent kept together which results in destroying the illusion of

boxes going around each other:https://imgur.com/a/abaNZa7, https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/9a16c189.jpg

Keeping your gaps narrow and consistent is critical to being able to use neighbouring forms as effectively as possible to infer information about space.

Also some other mistakes are some wobbly lines and you should do only one Rotating boxes exercise not two like you submitted.But this are minor mistakes compare to the other ones.I suggest going one more time through Rotating boxes homework before doing a redo just so you dont make other mistakes which are also common while doing this exercise.

Organic perspective

First thing I can see is that perspective in these are often to complicated which results in really messy exercises.Try to keep your perspective simple like you did in some examples, mainly : https://imgur.com/a/YFVNfts. There are also a lot of wobbling lines and redone lines which I already explained are bad. Also I noticed you organics perspective doesnt really have a flow and most of the boxes are overlapping in a way that doesent have an effect of organic movement,try putting just a bit of a box beneath another box. Most of your boxes dont follow the Y method of drawing a box : https://imgur.com/a/YCYMEL8 and tho there are some different boxes most of them are the same size which doesent convey the sense of depth if

the boxes were larger and smaller.

Wrong:https://imgur.com/a/KlwVx2w

Right:https://imgur.com/a/nAEwNNe

*Main poinst:

-Draw more from arm

-Ghost before putting on a final line

-When drawing ellipses draw 2-3 time through them

-Dont redo lines remember No matter how off a line is, a student should never repeat it

-If you ever catch yourself guessing or uncertain about how to draw a line, stop and step back. Take a look at the system you're working with, and think about the short list of possible behaviours. In one point perspective (which we are using for this exercise), you have the following behaviours:

-1.All lines that go off into the distance converge at the vanishing point

-2.All horizontal lines run perfectly parallel to the horizon

-3.All vertical lines run perfectly perpendicular to the horizon