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2:22 PM, Wednesday August 26th 2020
Hello LIAMNGUYEN, I've looked through your assignments and here are some notes that might help you:
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Superimposed Lines: Confident strokes? Check! Smooth lines? Check! Great accuracy? Check! Everything you've done in this exercise is just outstanding! The same can also apply for the straight and wavy lines you've drawn in the "Tables of Eclipses" exercise.
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Ghosted Lines: I'm falling in love with your lines, they are so smooth and highly accurate! 100000/10 from me! There are, however, mistakes then and there, several of your lines tend to arch when reaching towards either ends of them. Do try to keep your pen's trajectory consistent in the future!
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Ghosted Planes: I have no comments here, 'chef kiss' la perfection.
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Eclipses in Planes: There are quite a handful of eclipses that are distorted in this assignment, but don't worry, I've also seen a lot of eclipses that are very smooth and rounded. I think it would be best for you if you practiced this exercise more.
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Tables of Eclipses: This is really creative, I love how you combine the "superimposed lines" exercise with this one. Most of your eclipses in this exercise are very smooth, and only a few of them are slightly distorted. However, you should've drawn columns that surround your eclipse rows (like the four eclipse rows at the bottom half of this exercise's first page). The purpose of those columns is to set a goal for you, to put a limit to your eclipses.
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Funnels: I don't have anything to say for this one, your work is splendid!
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Plotted Perspective: I have no comments on your work, it's beautiful! The use of different colored pens really makes it easier to see.
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Rough Perspective: I am amazed by your accuracy, the boxes are well-drawn too, though I don't know why you didn't extend the lines in the second page of this exercise.
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Rotated Boxes: Again, beautiful work! Mwoah mwoah! However, I don't think you should put multiple exercises into one page, as it might make evaluation harder.
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Rotated Boxes: The boxes are great, as well as the distances between them, but some of your lines in this exercise are quite wobbly.
Next Steps:
Your assignments are very well-done! Probably by the time you're reading this, you've moved on to the 250 Box Challenge and Lesson 2, but if you haven't, be sure to complete the 250 Box Challenge before starting Lesson 2. Before starting any new lesson/challenge, you should spend 10-15 minutes drawing some exercises from Lesson 1 again (I think you should put more emphasis on "Eclipses in Planes" exercise) Keep going!
11:29 AM, Thursday August 27th 2020
Hi DRAMALLAMA,
Thank you so much for your valuable feedback!!!
I'll take it along my journey!!
1:24 PM, Thursday August 27th 2020
^^ Keep up the good work!
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