10:18 AM, Saturday September 10th 2022
Congratulations on making it through the box challenge!
Now to the critique:
Overall your lines look great: they are straight and smooth! I do see really slight curving and wobbling on some of your lines but considering most of your lines don't have this problem, I wouldn't worry about it. Just remember to take time to draw each line carefully. Crosshatching on your boxes is also most of the time really neat; however for example in the box 68 the crosshatching overshoots or undershoots on both sides. When deciding to add crosshatching, remember to take your time with each line, planning each line and executing it confidently. When it comes to the line weight, it should be applied to the silhouette of the box to make the form more cohesive. I see couple of boxes like the 114 that have the inner corner line thicker as well. If this is due to drawing the extension lines, it's fine but otherwise don't redraw lines without a good reason.
But as I said before, your mark-making is overall excellent. The things I pointed out are just really small things to look out for in the future.
You have extended the majority of your lines correctly, and in the cases where you have not, you have realized it and made a note of it. Good!
Your boxes perspective wise are really well constructed! When looking at the box as a whole I don't see parallel lines or diverging lines. I do notice though that some of your boxes have a single line either diverging, being parallel to another line or converging too much. For example boxes 177 and 96. This is a really common thing to happen and not something you need to worry about too much. One thing that could help with this could be thinking about the relationships between lines. You could try and change up the order in which you draw your boxes to help with this. You have also marked yourself in what direction the lines should have gone, which I think is a great way to learn. When doing this you could also try to imagine how changing the line's direction affects the other lines. I would also recommend ScyllaStew's method but it looks like you are already using it.
Lastly, don't be too harsh on yourself. The goal is not to be able to draw boxes perfectly in perspective.
As a whole you have done an amazing job with this challenge! I'll mark this as completed and you are free to move on to the lesson 2. Considering how good your boxes are, you can also start looking at the advanced box exercises. Keep up the good work!
Next Steps:
Move on to the lesson 2.