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12:54 AM, Wednesday April 7th 2021

Nice job finishing lesson 3.

Arrows: Remember the distance between the bends should be smaller with the far part and bigger with the near part to convey perspective. You made all the bends equidistant.

Plants: You have done quite a good job with the textures / details. Sometimes you are not constructing but just outlining though, for example your potted cactus drawings. They are just flat shapes with textures applied. Think of how the pot it a tapered cylinder and construct it that way using two ellipses. The cacti themselves are fairly simple so you should throw on a couple nice contour lines to construct the 3D aspect.

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2:04 AM, Wednesday April 7th 2021

Thanks for the critique!!

I will pay more attention in the perspective of the arrows and the construction in the plants so that they don't look like 2D.

Thank you again.

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