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2:24 AM, Friday April 22nd 2022

Okay I'm going to review what you've worked on.

Lines Section

Superimposed Lines: These are good.

Ghosting Lines: Very good.

Ghosted planes: Nothing to say other than even better than lines

Elipses Section

Talbe of Elipses: You're elipses are wonderful, but your first one, I'm not sure why elipses were drawn outside. Also the lines, the curved ones as shown in the directions are seen in your second table but not your first unless I'm not seeing it. The second one it was tricky to see those lines.

Elipses in Planes: Really good effort, really see trying to make sure they touch all edges.

Funnels: Well done.

Boxes section

Plotted persepctive: Beatiful but wish it was right side up instead of sideways.

Rough Perspective: It seems your extensions are going to the vanishing point, rather than missing as in the example. I think you missed the point of the exercise.

Rotate Boxes: Great sphere, even if one of the boxes was sticking slightly too much out but I think you got what was being asked.

Organic Perspective: Pretty much have it. I don't see any glaring red flags.

Final thoughts: When uplaoding, please make sure your images are right side up to help see so nobody has to tilt their neck in a sideways postion and be uncomfortable when reviewing. And please make sure images are uploaded in order of hw given so we can really see improvement.

Next Steps:

I'm sorry to say but due to missing what was asked in rough perspective we need a revision done of that. But the good news with seeeing everythign else, especially the boxes, the 250 box challange isn't going to be too hard for you.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
7:34 AM, Thursday July 21st 2022

Sorry for the late reply, it's been a while and I must have missed a notification. Thanks a lot for the feedback, I finished the 250 boxes challenge in the meantime and moved on to other stuff! Cheers!

3:38 PM, Thursday July 21st 2022

Ah I see. Well just to note that your really shouldn't untill you've had someone critique just in case. Hope things are going well.

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