Hi,i just posted my 250 boxes challenge yesterday but i will give my critique about your homework.
Well first of all, you got a cool accuracy and the lines feels very smooth.
about the orientation of the boxes's lines they're good as well,of course some (especially the back interior lines) are a little of but that's pretty normal.
Now what i think could be better, it's those lines that you scribble as if you didn't like them.In those cases you should just let them be it's part of the process.
you seem to have forgotten to ''shade'' one side of most of the boxes as you forgot to just take one stroke in the interior lines
At last i want to emphasize that you realy did a great job, and to give more attention to keep things more neat
so... yeah, bye
Next Steps:
well i think you should obviously wait some other people to do critique,but for me you ready to go to lesson 2
Right from when students hit the 50% rule early on in Lesson 0, they ask the same question - "What am I supposed to draw?"
It's not magic. We're made to think that when someone just whips off interesting things to draw, that they're gifted in a way that we are not. The problem isn't that we don't have ideas - it's that the ideas we have are so vague, they feel like nothing at all. In this course, we're going to look at how we can explore, pursue, and develop those fuzzy notions into something more concrete.
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