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11:45 AM, Friday September 13th 2024

Hi, Kort3. I also really happy to see you too! ^^ Firstly thanks for doing this in-depth critique. Its really means a lot!

I understand and totally agree with your point about my arrows, leaves and branches. I still have a long way to go and will revisit them throughout my warmups without rushing and giving time to every line. What i struggle the most, in my opinion, is the variety in twisting and turning, perhaps i should look more through the references and update my visual library.

When it comes to plants i agree that they came really decent not only in the end result but how i started to understand process of construction and decision making.(Really glad how my three cacti came up in terms of construction where i understand how spikes align and how bumps works between them).

Again deep thanks for this critique. Hope we will meet again!

1:58 PM, Sunday September 15th 2024

I'm sure that you will improve using references and making the warmups, so keep going!! Has been a pleasure! ^^

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