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5:32 PM, Wednesday January 24th 2024

Solid submission and solid review but I want to add that your rotated boxes are missing the corner boxes. You should complete the exercise before moving on. Don't worry about ruining the paper, the point of the exercise is to learn not to look pretty.

Next Steps:

Complete the rotated box exercises by adding the missing 4 corner boxes

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5:42 AM, Saturday January 27th 2024

Thank you for your comment. I have added the 4 corner boxes. Here's the link to my rotated boxes exercise:

https://imgur.com/a/WE0SQs6

7:10 AM, Saturday January 27th 2024

Good job. Very good looking exercise.

Next Steps:

Move to 250 boxes

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In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.

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