I think I did a fairly good job. I only struggled with the Organic Perspective exercise... I think I've overdone it with the foreshortening and made the corners to far back so the boxes looked a bit wonky, but after rewatching the video I improved it in the following iterations, especially on the second page. Looking forward to the 250 Box Challenge!
Thanks for looking at my homework :)
Overall, your work is good and your accuracy is great. Although, one thing I find necessary to mention is the fact that your lines tend to wobble, perhaps you are focusing too much on accuracy and are forgetting that the number 1 priority is confident, smooth lines. You don't need to completely redo everything, but I would like to request one or two pages of the ghosted planes exercise with your focus purely on smooth and consistent mark making. Take a look at this page again for a refresher on markmaking: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/3/markmaking
Other than that, I don't have much to say other than your rotated boxes were beautiful to look at.
Next Steps:
One or two pages of the Ghosted Planes exercise, with your focus on making confident and smooth lines.
Thank you very much for the feedback!
I totally agree with the wobbling. I think it had to do with the limited space of my desk. It kind of limited shoulder movement. I also have a gaming chair with high arm rests that often got in the way.
Thats why I moved to another table do redraw the exercises :) that kind of improved it, I think. I did one page with my pinky finger on the paper as a guide, which I normally do. I also did almost a full page not touching the paper with my hand while drawing the lines. Those looked pretty good IMO.
Link: https://imgur.com/a/0VCUWbx
Well, I hope to have met expectations :) looking forward to the 250 Box Challenge and to give feedback to others!
Thanks :)
Thanks
Totally understandable that the limited space made it more difficult. Your lines are much smoother now, looking great!
I think you're definitely all good to move on to the 250 Box Challenge now! :)
Next Steps:
Start the 250 Box Challenge :)
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