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4:19 PM, Tuesday August 2nd 2022

Oops... sorry, I didn't mean to do that. Okay so, here is the link to my revision, except this time it's not a report.

https://imgur.com/a/HMJmwOk

Hopefully this is good enough, I did my best to not apply line weight unless it was absolutely necessary, and never underlying the constructional forms.

Thanks for the critique, I really appreciate it.

2:30 AM, Saturday August 6th 2022

Hi! So this is a lot better. There are still some minor things, like that corner on the beetle's upper thorax, or some intersection lines on the legs that look a bit too flat, but you'll have plenty of time to practice those things on the next lesson. So, congratulations on finishing Lesson 4, and feel free to move on to Lesson 5!

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4:20 PM, Saturday August 6th 2022

Thank you very much, your critique was greatly needed and much appreciated! you helped me a lot!

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