Hello Meapr0, I’ll be reviewing your 250 Box Challenge today.

First off, congratulations on completing the first hurdle of Drawabox. It’s definitely a long marathon, but the quality of work between the start and end pages really demonstrates overall improvement. Now let’s begin with the critique.

Things you did well:

• Lines confidence was definitely a major strength here. Construction lines are relatively straight, and you maintain confidence in your lines.

• Clear experimentation with box size and orientation. This is a positive habit to carry forward and helps progress spatial reasoning ability.

• Line weight was applied appropriately and added subtle depth to the box form. Although optional, it's great to hone this tool for usage in future lessons.

Things you can work on:

• Boxes come into issues with 1-2 sets of lines being parallel, resulting in divergence towards the vanishing point. Here's an example displaying how the lines diverge the more we lengthen those parallel lines. Whether it's gradual or quick, all lines should converge. It may be difficult to judge gradual convergence on shallow boxes, but we want to be aware of angles when estimating to ensure lines aren't parallel.

• Hatching is generally well done; however, the lines are bunched together pretty tightly. This isn't a huge problem, but it might be resulting in uneven spacing and/or wobble on the box planes. Spreading those lines out a bit could help achieve smooth lines and give yourself enough space to work with to establish uniform hatching.

• A majority of these boxes fall under the shallow foreshortening category. In future warm-ups, try experimenting more with rapid convergence and see how they change with different-shaped boxes.

Overall, you've done a good job of steadily improving your box quality. I'll mark this down as complete and send you off to Lesson 2. Good luck!