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3:09 AM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022

Arrows:-

you are doing arrows wrong, u are not keeping perspective in mind the further something is the smaller it is the closer it is the bigger it is.

check this link:-

https://youtu.be/icWl_jpJres

and redo this exercise.

the leaves and others are well done enough.

Branches:-

branches for proper branches make sure u draw ellipses 90 degrees to the flow line that wat it will be better.

Next Steps:

redo the arrow exercise and send it here to be checked. and go through the drawabox arrow exercise video and written material again.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
4:25 AM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022
edited at 4:41 AM, Aug 3rd 2022

Thanks. I'll will do this tommorow morning.

edited at 4:41 AM, Aug 3rd 2022
6:34 PM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022

Here's my redo of my arrows excercise. https://imgur.com/a/jV22qLr

6:47 PM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022

great now move on and goodluck

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