Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
5:14 PM, Friday October 28th 2022
Thank you in advance for your critique!.
Hello. I will be reiviewing your lessong one hw
Superimposed Lines: Some of these got a little messy. Might be due to rushing but other than that I think you got this.
Ghosted Lines: Well done on these.
Ghosted Planes: I don't see any problem with these.
Table of Elipses: Some of the elipses are wobbly but I think you are showing you are trying to keep everything nice and tight. Good.
Elipses in Planes: Since there are quiet a bit breaking out of boundries, remembering ghosting is your friend. But that's just something for practice and warmups.
Funnels: Other than the one running into the neighbor, it looks better with the elipses
Plotted perspectives: Good work but watch the ink in your pen or how lightly you are pressing into the paper. That is causing your lines going away from your boxes to break/dissapear.
Rough Perspective: Saw improvement as you went along and showing understanding.
Rotated Boxes: I think you might have missed the reading of this. Also not sure why lines were drawn breaking away as that isn't required for this part of the HW.
Organic Perspective: The only thing I will say is you don't have to draw your boxes breaking out of the screen.
Next Steps:
I think one page of Roated boxes and Organic Perspective will help you before you tackle the 250 box challange. Make sure to re-read direcitons.
Hello, here is the link for the revision:
Thank you for your very quick reply (I assumed it would take a week to get a review and only checked back after a week).
Okay I'm looking at this and I still feel driections are not being read carefully. Organic perspective is very wonky to look at. My suggestion, just one, only one page (Not two), and look at Uncomfortable's example and others who have completed this hw. Even mine can be looked at.
Next Steps:
One page Oraganic Perspective
A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.
In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.
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