1:54 PM, Wednesday June 14th 2023
Your forms are looking better here but your organic intersections could still use some work.
You're still laying your forms over one another in the same parallel direction rather than perpendicularly.
To help explain what this meants try to imagine that you're above what you've drawn. While looking straight down you place a form or even a single line. You then want to add another form/line on top of it, instead of just drawing right over top of the form/line that's already there, rotate it so that it forms an X or + instead, this allows the forms to wrap around one another instead of just resting on top of each other.
Hopefully that clarifies things, I'm hopeful that you can practice this in your own time so I'll be marking your submission complete.
Best of luck in lesson 3.
Quick edit: I typo'd 2 in the steps below, you're good to move on to lesson 3.
Next Steps:
Move on to lesson 2.