250 Box Challenge

1:07 PM, Sunday April 18th 2021

250 Boxes Challenge - pCloud

250 Boxes Challenge - pCloud: https://e.pcloud.link/publink/show?code=kZKHikZtjvWHVx9ERfHxzfSOu5UtplJ3lhy

Hi,

Here's my 50 hours boxes challenge :)

Every session of doing boxes was for 5 boxes.

Thanks.

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8:11 PM, Monday April 19th 2021

Congratulations for completing the 250 Box Challenge!

I can see you made some good improvement with the quality of your mark making. Your lines steadily become straighter and more confident looking as you progressed through the challenge. You drew your boxes at a pretty good size and with a variety of orientations and foreshortening. You also start to do a better job of getting your sets of parallel lines to converge more consistently towards their shared vanishing points!

Before we begin I just want to mention that in the future, when you go to scan your homework submissions, it would be better to scan your homework using the "photo" setting instead of the "drawing" setting. The drawing setting tends to up the contrast on an image and can cause you to lose some of the subtlety in your line work.

I noticed that you still struggle a bit with applying your extra line weight. When you go to add weight to a line it is important that you treat the added weight the same way you would a brand new line. That means taking your time to plan and ghost through your mark so that when you go to execute your extra line weight, it is done confidently and so that it blends seamlessly with your original mark. This will allow you to create more subtle and clean looking weight to your lines that reinforces the illusion of solidity in your boxes/forms. Extra line weight should be applied to the silhouette of your boxes. I recommend that you try adding your extra line weight in no more than 1-2 pases so that you can easily identify mistakes in your work. This diagram should help also you better understand how to properly apply your extra line weight.

Finally while your converges do improve overall I think this diagram will help you as well. When you are looking at your sets of lines you want to be focusing only on the lines that share a vanishing point. This does not include lines that share a corner or a plane, only lines that converge towards the same vanishing point. Now when you think of those lines, including those that have not been drawn, you can think about the angles from which they leave the vanishing point. Usually the middle lines have a small angle between them, and this angle will become negligible by the time they reach the box. This can serve as a useful hint.

Congrats again and good luck with lesson 2!

Next Steps:

Continue to lesson 2!

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9:37 PM, Monday April 19th 2021
edited at 9:41 PM, Apr 19th 2021

Thanks for the review.

My previous reviewer said the image was not good. I have put my scanner to maximum resolution and photo mode already (can't do more).

Do you think photo from my phone will be better to scan my work ?

Do you have an example of the subtlety you are taking about, please ?

and yeah, for the line weight, i figured this would be a good exercice, so i usually do 5-6 passes. I didn't know if it was "too much".

Thanks

edited at 9:41 PM, Apr 19th 2021
9:15 AM, Tuesday April 20th 2021

Ho, it just hit me. You are the personne that created this video : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mteUPdCHn4s&t=

It has help me, thanks for doing this :)

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A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.

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