10:02 AM, Friday June 16th 2023
Hello, I’ll be doing your critique today!
Organic Arrows
Good sense of depth and variety of arrows. Nice and smooth lines, the hatching is done well too.
Organic forms with contour lines
The ellipses rotate very well and follow the motion of the sausage great work here!
The contours look a little flat, try to ghost them like you would an ellipse and then when you are ready, draw an overshooting curve.
Texture
These textures… wow
Perfect transition from dark to light, great use of shadows!
Dissections
More amazing textures! They wrap around the forms like they belong there!
Form Intersections
Excellent work! great hatching and intersections!
Organic Intersections
This too is great! You would do great in future lessons!
Next Steps:
Move on to Lesson 3 and keep it up!