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10:02 AM, Friday June 16th 2023

Hello, I’ll be doing your critique today!

Organic Arrows

Good sense of depth and variety of arrows. Nice and smooth lines, the hatching is done well too.

Organic forms with contour lines

The ellipses rotate very well and follow the motion of the sausage great work here!

The contours look a little flat, try to ghost them like you would an ellipse and then when you are ready, draw an overshooting curve.

Texture

These textures… wow

Perfect transition from dark to light, great use of shadows!

Dissections

More amazing textures! They wrap around the forms like they belong there!

Form Intersections

Excellent work! great hatching and intersections!

Organic Intersections

This too is great! You would do great in future lessons!

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Move on to Lesson 3 and keep it up!

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3:34 PM, Friday June 23rd 2023

Thank you so much for your critique!

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