Hello Rensam, thank you for replying with your revisions.

These are much better, great work.

You're drawing complete forms for your head, thorax and abdomen, and you're usually drawing around your ellipses twice before lifting your pen.

You're keeping a more even line thickness through the various stages of your construction, instead of making the later steps much darker and tracing over the lines you want to keep visible.

You're mostly working in 3D by adding complete forms to your construction when you want to build or change something, and you're showing a good understanding of how the forms you draw exist in 3D space.

I can see you're working on using the sausage method to construct your legs. Something I noticed is that you seem to be missing the contour curves for the intersections where the sausage forms join together. I've marked them in red on the sausage method diagram and drawn some of them on one of your constructions here.

What we're doing by adding these contour curves is similar to the form intersections exercise from lesson 2. We're explaining how these forms connect together in 3D space. So, these little curves might seem insignificant at first, but they're an important step for these constructions so remember to include them in future.

I'll go ahead and mark this as complete.