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4:24 PM, Monday July 12th 2021

first off i think you did pretty good

your lines are pretty good i think that you could ghost a little bit more though

you should probably re-read and re-do eclipses in planes

and for funnels remember to align your ellipses to the minor axis, it should fold in half evenly

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9:20 PM, Monday July 12th 2021

https://imgur.com/a/K013Sk0

Re did the Ellipses in Planes. ... The issue with the funnels is that the center lines I drew were not in the center of the funnel. But yes I understand the concept. Thanks

2:59 PM, Tuesday July 13th 2021

much better

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