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11:10 AM, Thursday November 3rd 2022
Hi, I'll be giving you my feedback on your lesson :D
Ghosted Lines and Superimposed Lines
Overall, you did a pretty good job with the ghosted lines and superimposedlines. There were some slight accuracy error with the ghosted lines, with you overextending after the point you should have finished. I think one of the tips comfortable suggested is to lift your whole hand so you don't keep pushing through the lines. I prefer that you made a straight lines and worry about the accuracy later, which is what you did :D
Ghosted Ellipses / Planes
For the ghosted planes, most of the lines you did were straight. There is a slight wobble when the line almost reached its destination. You have also improved your accuracy, which is great. The ellipses were a bit inaccurate, lots of them are not on top each other. It does need getting used to, so just practice ghosting ellipses when you do your normal drawing.
Table of Ellipses
You seem to be pretty good with long slender ellipses compared to more wider ellipses (that looked almost like a circle). You are also better at smaller ellipses than larger ellipses, which make sense since it is harder to estimate when moving you arm much wider. But other than that, it looked good.
Funnels
Like previous advice, the larger ellipses are the one that gives you most trouble. Though even on this part you show a lot of improvement compared to previous ellipses exercise, so I say you are heading on the right direction.
Rough Perspective
Lines for the boxes feel a bit weak and a downgrade from the ghosted lines you did earlier. Though I see a lot of improvement as you continue to draw. More and more point goes toward the VP and I'm sure you are going to get a lot more practice with the 250 box exercise.
Rotated Box
It looked amazing. Most of the boxes are rotated according to the angle, though their size seems to change. The middle one for example was too small sometime while the boxes next to it were somehow wider. The corner one almost looked microscopic. Other than that, it's a thumbs up from me.
Organic Perspective
It looked decent, though the closer boxes overlapping with the smaller one makes it a bit hard (the second image. There were some confidence and accuracy issues, but you can hone it out later in 250 boxes :D
Overall, your lines are good, though sometime it downgrades. The ellipses need a bit more practice. You are pretty good with rotating boxes as well. Move on the next lesson and good luck :D
The Science of Deciding What You Should Draw
Right from when students hit the 50% rule early on in Lesson 0, they ask the same question - "What am I supposed to draw?"
It's not magic. We're made to think that when someone just whips off interesting things to draw, that they're gifted in a way that we are not. The problem isn't that we don't have ideas - it's that the ideas we have are so vague, they feel like nothing at all. In this course, we're going to look at how we can explore, pursue, and develop those fuzzy notions into something more concrete.