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6:26 AM, Friday February 14th 2020

Hi~

Lines look good, though you'll sometimes arc to meet your end point- try to be a little less conscious of it. Ellipses are quite confident, as they should be, so no problems on that front, either. They'll tighten up in time. In the funnels exercise, though, be careful that their degree increases as they move away from the center. The box section is quite nice, too. Careful not to redo lines, though. If a line it's wrong, it's wrong. Spend a little longer ghosting the next one, if anything.

Anyway, this is a solid submission, so congrats, and GL on the next one.

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2:31 PM, Friday February 14th 2020

Thank you!! I'll take this critique to heart.

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