Hey there and congrats on completing Lesson One!

You already said it yourself and you were right, there are definitely a few things I think you should go over before going onto the next section. Don't worry though, we'll go through them together!

Lines

Your Superimposed Lines were a bit wobbly but I feel like you got better around the second page. Still wobbly but progress is progress, congrats!

For the Ghosted Lines, they all have either an arch to them or even end up wobbly. This comes either due to not ghosting enough beforehand and/or getting insecure around the end of your stroke. It's okay if you shoot over your point of destination, the essence of this particular lessons is confidence in your stroke. And believe me you will need it in the upcoming Challenge. They're also pretty short and few on that big paper.

Same goes for the Ghosted Planes. Since you have way more lines in this exercise, so this is the first thing I'd like for you to redo! Ghost your lines as many times as you need and then place one confident stroke. Also try to really fill up the page. I know it's a lot and difficult but the practice and patience will pay off and you'll thank yourself later. You can look at Uncomfortable's Example Sheet in the Homework Section as Reference too! (I do that to, so often haha)

Ellipses

Ellipses are mostly well done! Congrats! They feel more confident and smooth than your lines and you always draw through them twice, like Uncomfortable said in his explanation. Not everybody does that sadly haha. But! In the Tables of Ellipses your Ellipses are sometimes floating randomly in the air which is what you're not supposed to do. Your Ellipses are supposed to be stacked neatly beside each other, touching each other or the border of the tables. No floating around randomly.

You'll need that skill of aiming your ellipses later as well so redo this exercise as well, please. Again, you can look at Uncomfortable's example homework and even sneak a peek into the already completed Lesson One Homeworks of other students. Aside from that, your Ellipses are pretty smooth, good job on that one!

Boxes

First exercise is totally fine and okay. Good job here :D

For the second one, Rough Perspective, it seems like you haven't quite understood the theory behind vanishing lines. However they're the very basis and everything you have to know to continue working on the Lessons. I'd advise for you to reread and maybe watch the videos of the entire section regarding vanishing points in particular and the page for the assignment. If you still don't feel like you can really understand what it's all about, feel free to join the Discord Server, there are a lot of people willing and free to help and explain everything in detail!

The Rotated Boxes and Organic Perspective are both difficult assignments, so congrats on completing them! Don't worry about them being off, you'll work on perspective and boxes later on.

All in all, I think if you really want to complete the lessons in this course, you should definitely revisit the assignments I've mentioned. I know it's hard and tedious work but trust me, it will be a 100 times harder if you don't learn them now. I wholeheartedly believe in you though. You did the entire thing already, I think you'll be able to redo a few pages.

And like I said, if you have any questions you can answer to this comment or hop onto the Discord Server where a lot more people are available for questions!

Down below I have a summary of the pages I think you should redo before hopping onto the next Challenge. Don't forget to post them here so I can mark you clear when you're done! Lots of luck!

• Lerin