Hello! I just finished lesson two, im looking forward to next lessons about plants, insects and animals! looks fun! anyway, i would greatly appreciate if someone was kind enough to critique these for me. thank you.
have a nice day.
I am currently going through lesson 2 and I'm on the texture study, one thing I I'm trying to be conscious of and would suggest to you is to take more time on the lines you're making. Uncomfortable warns about the mistake of scribbling I'm not saying your work looks anything like that image there, I am just seeing how you could slow down while hatching your shadows or filling in your low-light areas on your textured forms. Notice how the darkest scales on that lesson are have dark inky blacks with no white filling in.
Maybe try another texture you already did and slow down, you'll be able to compare your first attempt and the second attempt and notice where you improved!
Best of luck!
you are so right! i am way too impatient, tried to be slower in these lessons but still, anyway, thanks for pointing it out! i will work on improving it and try not to scribble mindlessly.
good luck on your art journey aswell!
Rapid Viz is a book after mine own heart, and exists very much in the same spirit of the concepts that inspired Drawabox. It's all about getting your ideas down on the page, doing so quickly and clearly, so as to communicate them to others. These skills are not only critical in design, but also in the myriad of technical and STEM fields that can really benefit from having someone who can facilitate getting one person's idea across to another.
Where Drawabox focuses on developing underlying spatial thinking skills to help facilitate that kind of communication, Rapid Viz's quick and dirty approach can help students loosen up and really move past the irrelevant matters of being "perfect" or "correct", and focus instead on getting your ideas from your brain, onto the page, and into someone else's brain as efficiently as possible.
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