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6:14 PM, Friday September 4th 2020

Hello, i'll be reviewing lesson 1 for you.

First thing i noticed is that your lines are really confident, props for that.

You seem to have problems drawing circles in different positions, your circle boxes are entirely made of 1 style. They don't seem wobbly at all but it seems you aren't confident on trying other ways of drawing circles or just didn't bother with it. However I won't assign another page because i feel that you can always fix this by drawing more circles during warmup.

On the other hand your Funnels small axis aren't properly drawn (i suppose you did this for aesthetics?) all of them are shorter than needed. Please stick to the things explained in the lessons, and follow them properly. You have the basic idea down of how this exercise works though.

Same thing for the Plotted Perspective lesson, your lines aren't drawn all the way to the VP, which you should definitely do.

Overall a work done well, it seems you understood all the lessons even though you try to make lessons fun for yourself, keep it to a minimum. These exercise are supposed to drawn as shown

Good luck with your 250 Box Challenge. I definitely recommend going for Box Challenge before lesson 2.

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11:35 PM, Tuesday November 10th 2020

Hi, thank you for reviewing.

Well, I was trying to at least draw one of the circles properly or I'm satisfy with before drawing other variations but it was finish before that happen. I'll do the circles when warming up.

You mean the minor axis? aren't they suppose to be short? In the lesson the minor axis of the circle are short though.

Oh, I thought that is OK because if I draw all the way it feels kinda messy.

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