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9:47 AM, Sunday February 19th 2023

Congrats to complete this challenge.

Well, let's start, as a whole the quality of your box is amazing especially when I look at your first pages, they don't really look like first pages. Your lines extending in the right direction which is exellent, your hatching lines are great and they are on the right face which are facing us. Secondly your lines are rarely diverging and they are also pretty not often parallel so exellent. To conclude with positive point your line are really straight (amazing).

However you should draw a little bit more of variety in your box.

I'm sorry but I don't really have anything to complain about your challenge try and I saw that you was taking some "notes" to don't repeat your miss so it's perfect.

It's was a nice work :)

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Exellent as a whole continue like that with the lesson 2.

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
11:52 PM, Sunday February 19th 2023
edited at 11:53 PM, Feb 19th 2023

Thk u for the feedback !

edited at 11:53 PM, Feb 19th 2023
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